I read this on ESPN today. This is why The Lost Tools of Writing teachers parallelism first among all schemes. If you can’t structure a parallel thought, you can’t communicate clearly. It’s easy. All you need is parts, parts, parts of speech you need.
Warner has been voted to five Pro Bowls, won two NFL MVP awards, one Super Bowl and became the second quarterback in history to throw more than 100 touchdown passes for two NFL franchises.
Can you fix it?